true or fallen chap2 pg3

There has been great improvement through this comic in expressions,anatomy and backrounds so this page to me looks very nice^^ I do have a few problems with it though. Im a bit confused as to whats going on, I know there is something about to attack but my eyes are finding it a bit hard to follow each frame. Im not sure where I should look first. I personally didnt see Karli as that small in the last ones but maybe im wrong<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Your backrounds always impress me and they are very nicely done though<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />

I personally think their should be a page or two inbetween this one and the last because it seems to move to quickly in my opinion.

Anyway other then the above I think it really is a lovely page and your artwork is improving no end<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" /> I cant wait to see what has made them all so upset.